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March 17, 2008

Homemade Ideas

Today, I’m making a homemade laundry starch. Why? Because I’m sick of going to the shops every time I need a can. With a quick google search I have a pot simmering on my stove. I placed 4 tblspn of plain flour (I had no cornstarch - what kind of housewife am I?), 4 cups of cold water, 8 drops of lemon oil. Stir, cool and place in a spray bottle with a mister function. The mix has NOT gone clear, probably because I used plain flour. Hey, don’t blame me if dh’s work shirts smell like lemon cake.

Then, onto cleaning and homemade biscuits. Lazy people save money. lol.

March 16, 2008

Scam Publisher Anyone?

Complaints about NCP have been talked about this past week at Romance Divas. What I’d like to talk about on my blog is how a newbie author can spot the troubling signs of a scam internet publisher.

Just starting out, writing going well? You’ve submitted, right? All may not be as fine as you think. Did you do some thorough research before sending your manuscript into a publisher?

I sincerely hope so.

If you suspect your work is being accepted too readily - did you know that this is a sign of a scam publisher? No?

Do you receive direct answers to your questions? Are communications from the publisher frequently anonymous so the onus falls on nobody? Does the publisher claim it is seeking to work with first time authors? Received an agent’s offer to read your manuscript, only to be referred to some so called “professional” editors who charge a fee and do a lousy job?

Ding. Ding. Ding.

Bells should be going off. Red lights should be lighting up your computer desk. Or sofa.

Come in, spinner. Or sucker. It’s all up to you.

Check out this website if you have an inkling of suspicion. You’ll be glad you did.

March 5, 2008

Gold Coast Holiday 08

Hi,

 We’re back from our holiday, and I have photos to share.

 Q1 - The Tallest Residential Building in the World

 Q1 - The Tallest Residential Building in the World

 

 Side view from the unit we stayed in.

 

 Dad in his own unit. We were next door.

 

 Kind of blurry night view from the Q1

 

 Another view from the Q1. We were staying in that orange looking resort. You had to look down to see everything because if you looked straight ahead all you saw was sky.

Big shark at Sea World Shark Bay.

February 1, 2008

Character Development Quiz

I’m not one for trying to squeeze a personality into a stereotype, but this exercise is kind of fun if you’re a writer who needs to nail down a MC’s motivations and actions.

 An Enneagram Quiz catergorizes nine different types of personalities.

Type 1: The Reformer. The rational, idealistic type.
Type 2: The Helper. The caring, nurturing type.
Type 3: The Motivator. The adaptable, success-oriented type.
Type 4: The Artist. The intuitive, reserved type.
Type 5: The Thinker. The perceptive, cerebral type.
Type 6: The Skeptic. The committed, security-oriented type.
Type 7: The Generalist. The enthusiastic, productive type.
Type 8: The Leader. The powerful, aggressive type.
Type 9: The Peacemaker. The easygoing, accommodating type.

 Got five minutes to spare? Have a go here.

January 27, 2008

If a postman can build this from a dream, imagine the possibilities…

No words. Just pictures.

http://www.facteurcheval.com/?LANG=en

November 10, 2007

Going on a Holiday…

We’re at Brunswick Heads, NSW. Here are some pics.

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“View from our Balcony”

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“Old Walking Bridge”

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“View from Bridge”

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“The Beach (5min walk)”

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“Another Beach”

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“Lots of Park lands”

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“The Beach”

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“I’m Free!!!”

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“The Beach”

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“The River - Just outside our Door”

October 30, 2007

Free Halloween Read

Greener Pastures

Lady Annabelle Wright quashed the overwhelming urge to lift up her skirts and run as fast as her feet could carry her. Far away from her betrothal ball with its beautiful people, and glorious music. The entire way home if necessary.  

She winced. Home was no safe haven either, for her father, the Earl of Tonbridge ordered her marriage to Lord Oliver Burbank and she had two choices, both equally unpleasant. Accept the offer of marriage to Lord Burbank and claim her rightful inheritance, or refuse and be sent off to the country to act as governess to spiteful Aunt Ellen’s brutish children.

Her father always said, “Choose the devil you know.”  This was easy enough to say when he was not the one forced to decide. 

Lord Oliver Burbank was a cruel wastrel and a shudder of distaste rippled up her spine as she contemplated her future with such a man by her side. Her fiancé was a rake, an arrogant swine, and a gambler. She held nothing but contempt for him and his dallying ways. Why, only yesterday she met one of his whores when he had begged Annabelle to accompany him on a ride in his curricle through Hyde Park

She snapped her fan shut. Annabelle still held ideals, standards if you will, and her heart refused to believe that she would have to give up her very self in order to claim what should be hers by right.  

All week she had recited in her mind the explanation to the Earl, and the gentle let-down to Lord Burbank. She did not need to imagine her father’s wrath.

For, she knew that she could not marry Lord Burbank, yet it seemed when the moment came to tell him of her decision, the vice of her upbringing and general terror clamped down upon the chords in her throat, stilling the words. When had she become so weak? Too useless to fight for what she wanted? Society with its rigid demands and rules always caught her on the raw, undermining her sense of self. Being a Lady might allow her to enjoy fine gowns, and seasons in London, however it could not rid Annabelle of the feeling that the life she lived was not her own. The price simply became too high… 

She opened her fan, fluttering it furiously in her face. Would the pain inside her chest ever end?

Her breath escaped in shallow puffs, the corset beneath her pale green gown restricted her lungs and she plucked at the low neckline. She fought back the urge to scream, wishing to rip the confining clothes from her body. Annabelle glanced up, searching for an exit to the terrace. It was not the thing, she knew, to remove one’s presence when the ball was held in your honor, but to stay for another minute meant she might lose all control.  

The squeeze of the ballroom behind her, she grasped the banister and breathed deeply. She longed for a cool woodland breeze to ruffle through her hair, a soft, loose nightgown and chill bed linens.

“My dear, she does not need to know…”

The dark, familiar tone prodded her panic. It was him. Lord Burbank, cloaked in shadows in a violent clinch with one of his mistresses. Rage, panic and despair clouded her mind. At her betrothal ball, no less!

“You must call upon me, Oliver. Peter is away for some weeks…”

A woman’s soft laugh eddied into the night air. Felicity Gray held one of the most distinctive husky voices in the ton; which was no wonder when one considered that her aunt was a celebrated opera singer. Lady Gray was also married to an aging, indiscreet Lord Edward Gray, who took great delight in his own selfish pursuits. Altogether, she was a perfect mistress for a rake who wanted no other permanent ties.

Annabelle grimaced at the unmistakable sound of wet, ardent kissing. Her eyes closed, hands trembling, and nails dug into her palms. Tears pushed their way to the corner of her eyes, but refused to fall. Her face seemed to be frozen in a mask of pain. Isn’t that what her whole life amounted to? An unbearable charade?

She swallowed, the only sound she dare make. Annabelle saw it then. Stairs leading down to the gardens. She could simply walk away. The music floated around her, lilting, encouraging. Her father would be angry. She would marry someone else, anyone else. No, that was not true. She must be honest with herself.

She would…She would…

Her feet began moving by their own volition. She stared down at them numbly, watching their progress. The slippers made no sound upon the flat stone. Hopelessness became a whirlpool, its current demolishing fear, right and wrong.

No one came chasing down after her. She smiled. Her heart beat furiously, almost drowning out the loud music overhead. The path curved in two directions, one leading into the depths of the garden, the other around the front of the residence into complete darkness.

Yes. She yearned for the shadows, the black open air, and the soft warmth of her bed. She would order a carriage promptly, commanding to be taken away at once, claiming she was ill. It would be no lie.

A black carriage halted in front of Annabelle before she realised that she had not ordered any transport at all, but had been about to step out into the middle of the deserted street. A pair of splendid, chestnut horses snorted in the air, the bit between their teeth apparent before her distracted gaze. The driver sat in stoic silence at her interrupting presence. A dark hat shadowed his face, an overcoat disguising the tall, gaunt frame.   

A closer look revealed a large gold emblem shining upon the door of the carriage, the strange crest was illuminated from the lights flooding from the residence. Brows knitted, Annabelle stepped back, allowing the man to continue on his journey. 

The driver did not take up the reins. He turned slightly, giving a single rap to the roof of the carriage. The door swung open. 

The breath stilled in her throat, but the faceless driver made no other movement, even as she tried to discern the light of his eyes, and failed. They seemed empty. 

“If you would, Miss?” His arm gestured to the door of the carriage.

“You wish me…” her voice sounded rusty. “Who are you?”

The man turned to face forward, grasping the reins in both hands. “Your driver, Miss. You want to go for a ride, do you not?”

Did she? Oh, yes. More than anything. Annabelle did not believe that she would have the capacity to summon enthusiasm ever again. She walked to the door slowly. What if it was a trick? Would she even care? She peered into the carriage, glimpsing red velvet seats and complete darkness. Comfort and escape.

Heart heavy as lead, Annabelle lifted her skirts, pulling herself inside to rest on the plush seating. Her head relaxed back for a moment and she sighed with genuine bliss. Soon, she would be away from the ball, her betrothed, and her responsibilities even if for only a few stolen moments.

She reached out with a gloved hand to close the door, but it slammed closed before she could touch the handle. The carriage lurched unexpectedly, launching Annabelle from her snug seat onto the floor with a hard thump.

“Wait!” she called out. “Driver, slow down…” Her hand grabbed something solid and she pulled herself upwards, pushing her skirts away. “Stop, please…”

Realization hit with panic. She was being kidnapped by highwaymen.  Oh no, this was just her rotten luck. Her hands flexed and the thing she held flexed back. Oh my. She looked up.

A pair of yellow eyes gleamed down at her, feral in their intent. A flash of white teeth in a hungry grin pushed through the darkness.

“Welcome, my dear.”

A sharp scratch of fingernails lifted the hair over the cleft above her ear. “You will please me very much.”

The burn of razor-sharp teeth sank into the soft flesh of her exposed throat. The instant scream curdled in her mouth before blackness overcame her.

By Naomi Westbrook.

HAPPY HALLOWEEN!!!

October 23, 2007

A Writer Needs Exercise to Blow Away the Cobwebs.

And to lose a butt that’s starting to look a little too large. LOL. I joined a new gym today, and I’m excited. I have a personal trainer one day a week and intend to work out five days a week. Look out! I’m gonna burn some calories…

October 19, 2007

Another writing clue unravelled

I write clunky sentences. In fact, nearly everyone who has critiqued my work points this out to me. So, I have learnt to change my cadence, unlock the mysteries of rhythm and I have found something that I want to share with everyone:

 Plain English works best.

 There. That’s it. Simple, right?

Wait on, what is plain English?

Plain English is showing the readers exactly what you mean. Plain English means solid words; words that an eight year old could read and understand.

 Now, I suppose you’re wondering how this works.

Writing a story is done by stringing words together in a linear form. A reader wants the truth of the story, the very gut of it, and nothing else can deliver like solid words that everyone can understand.

 Plain English has power. A gentle poison, it can control and shape a reader’s mind while masking its true intent. Readers find comfort and familiarity in the simple words, and they stay in the dream world of the writer because the writing is SO EASY TO READ. 

 Simple writing hides story in plain sight. There’s magic in that.

October 11, 2007

Between the Gutter & The Sky by Babe King

On Sale October 9th at Freya’s Bower!!

This hunky youth worker is NOT what the doctor ordered!

Dr. Jaclyn Donnel will fight anything to fix the inefficient health care system that let her father die. When charismatic youth worker, Sam Allen’s expensive new rescue program threatens her under-funded ER, they’re bound to butt heads.

Sam knows first hand that the only way out of the gutter is a hand up. He’s determined to save Tasmania’s street kids, regardless of cost and the sexy, headstrong doctor opposing him, until one youth demands a price even Sam won’t pay — Jaclyn’s life.

They may not save the world, but they might just save each other.

Between the Gutter and the Sky received 5 champagne flutes from Cocktail Reviews!!!
“A thrilling finale gets the heart pumping and the tummy doing flip-flops.”

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